Forever A Fighter

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    Forever A Fighter

    He played Army with all the other 8-year-olds
    He climbed trees to conceal himself
    with branches,
    He made pop noises when he pointed his little fingers in the shape of a gun,
    He wore war paint to hide his face.

    He grew up a little.

    He became a young man,
    who sagged his pants and looked cool
    in stunna-shades.
    He started worrying about girls,
    and forgot all about his play Army days.

    He grew up a little more,
    and people gazed upon his face

    His eyes were determined and tough,
    but the viewers could not guess,
    what he would do,
    who he would become.
    His words grew hushed as actions increased.
    No one did guess this particular young man,
    by the way he dressed,
    the grease in his hair,
    But it was all in the eyes.

    Soon the time came,
    and he knew whatto do.
    With even steps, he marched into a new life.
    It was not believed he would do well,
    in the service,
    but his eyes held the truth.

    He was shipped off to war
    He was put into battle
    And as a bullet flew towards him,
    His eyes were still determined and tough,
    and now,
    they were hardened with pride.
    He died.

    He was born a fighter,
    though no one could tell,
    He sacraficed everything,
    and a hero he fell.

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    lucindaclaire commented on Forever A Fighter

    12-12-2009

    OMG....Another terrific write. I hate war, but have to agree that sometimes the service helps people become more....what is it? disciplined, I guess.

    Legos12

    12/12/2009

    Yeahh, i'm a military brat so I've seen a lot of things almost first-hand...

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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