Daughter

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    Daughter

                 Born today on unknown earth
                 I wrapped up you as my own
                 I take  you on my lap as precious
                 You're  ignorent  child for me
                 You're  God's gift for me
               
                How to make you a women I think
               How to  create your future  I'm worried
               What's the path for you to show I'm eager
                What's the devotation of love to express?

               Which thoughts are right for you 
               Sufferings of me or my unfruitful ways
               Narrow rituals or cultural concepts to put on you
               Twentyone century's freedom prospects to guide
               Or to show you the mixture of both

                Poeple here says girl's future's unknown
                But I say I'll give you the deeds of fulfilment
               To make you a perfect person 's my aim
                The exitence of remberance's for you 
              The fate's unknown but afforts are there

             Rest's in Gods hand.

               

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    Rhymer commented on Daughter

    04-26-2010

    Hopes, dreams and desires for the new born female child wrapped into a few lines of this wonderful poem....10 from me.

    jyothi

    07/06/2010

    TY for comment.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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