Unknown destination

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    Unknown destination

                            Lost in the wide indication of nowhere
                            Fear of shifting the place for new horizon
                            Prepared for new heaven or hell images
                            Spiritually motivated for front coming ideology

                              Each morning news're more of death and devasted
                              Each family facing the departure of dearer
                              More're reborn and similiar're  left the  harbour
                              Heart's pinched more when loved one's gone
                              
                            Wealthy or healthy all mind knows the fact
                             Beggar or giver once in time  have the feel
                             Old or young're passing by coming prophency
                            But still each human's scare of coming reality

                               Me also like everyone else think of death
                               Aware of unknown fear of lossing physical cocoon
                               Though must of deeds're fulfilled and desires're levasted
                               Now days should passed for proper  satisfaction
                               More truth of visage of new world's there.

                            

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    kdarcy commented on Unknown destination

    01-09-2011

    Aaahhhhhhhhh, what we see and what we don't, inner beauty struck in its destiny here for a time among all the ills and ugliness of this world. Why can't we act a bit more on the side of the beauty we can't see or let some sort of faith manifest itself in a positive way ? Nice thought provoking write. I'm starting to get used to your usage of words, much be a language thing, I like it, be well k

    jyothi

    01/25/2011

    TY for comment.

    DeepEclipse commented on Unknown destination

    09-29-2010

    Shapeshifter. It seems to speak of a fear of death but also inspires. To me life becomes the fullest when we learn to let go of our safe shape, as it states in the 3rd stanza. Seeing from many angles. Enjoyed this read. Evokes a complexity of emotions. In a good way.

    jyothi

    09/30/2010

    TY for comment though it mayn"t of full standard.

    ginga commented on Unknown destination

    07-31-2010

    jyothi, The ills and destruction in this world are woven through this fine poem that emotes fear and uncertainty. ginga

    jyothi

    08/01/2010

    Your comments're always indication of commen feeling.TY.

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