The Lovely Soul

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    The Lovely Soul

                    The Lovely Soul

    How can a mother forgets a lovely soul
    The days spend making him perfect man
    No days are spent without tracing him near by
    Still seems smiling face near our thought

    He made everyone cry in surrounding
    His goodness in life never to forget
    A shy one with inner perfection
    A doctor with  polite and humble

    Everyone says God likes the good soul
    It seems to be true in words
    Days will pass as grieve may be lessen
    Can mother pass a day without your presence?

    No one should think, I'm happy now
    Where blow of wind can't be seen
    Everyone stands in dismay
    Oh !God give courage to face pain

    Jyothi Sharma





     

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    Rhymer commented on The Lovely Soul

    03-15-2010

    I like the poem full of emotion..................................................
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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on The Lovely Soul

    03-01-2010

    I read a lot of pain in this poem. You have experessed this in your poem. Good Job.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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