Who could you be like that?

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    Who could you be like that?

     Who could you be so selfish?
    Who could you be so ignorant?
    Who could you forget what's relationship?
    who could you act as an unknown?

    Is all person's like you?
    Digging hole in own plate
    Is all modern feelings resembles as you?
    Scrubbing for some-good to find

    You go beyond destiny to find
    you think yourself smart by cheating
    you find happiness within earthy things

    you cover yourself with shield of iron

     
    But remember you will not remain same
    God blows is stronger than any one
    Days will come for you all
    If you cheat someone with one thought
    You Will be repenting inside nervously
    Don't think yourself clever now
    Time will show your path of rightness

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    Sydney commented on Who could you be like that?

    04-04-2010

    this is really powerful. i agree with betty. i like this poem. this is a great write. Sydney

    WormHolz commented on Who could you be like that?

    04-02-2010

    Reported, YOU ARE A RATE RIPPER lol ........................................

    jyothi

    04/02/2010

    Thanks for comment.

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Who could you be like that?

    03-01-2010

    Your poem shows a lot of emotion. It is true cheaters really never get anywhere. It all comes back in the end. Reaping what has been sewed or so they

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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