Sound of River

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    Sound of River

                        Mutual life's like flowing rivers
                        from both sides of snowy mountain
                        In the beginning these two flow nearer and nearer
                        with some enthusiasm and commitment attached together

                         There's full energetic wave and force for new direction
                          certain objectives and responsibilities lead the path
                          Now new rocky mountain try to entangled them to search
                          Boothe hibernated with little doubts and suspense
                          but still move on together for some ways

                         After certain walks both willing to go on own ways
                         Seems both wanting to focus on special move
                         One's moving along the Ganges and pebbles with interest
                         Other's just for the sake of move couldn't meet the speed

                        Are they blaming each other for continuity of force
                        Both don't understand real speed of life
                        Not expressing much still together on some thought
                        May be they'll be some days
                         for them to unit or to separate.
                        either to unit.               

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Sound of River

    05-26-2010

    Finely crafted jewel of water poetry and use of imagery and words with distinct detail as the reader feels the words and belongs there in spirit. Your pics on your page are breathtaking, too! ;-)

    jyothi

    05/27/2010

    TY for encouragement uplifting spirited words.

    ginga commented on Sound of River

    05-10-2010

    jyothi, I have a penchant for poems about water and rivers. A fine poem this is , raw in its beauty and organic in its details. ginga

    jyothi

    05/11/2010

    Thanks for comment. I'm new in the field of poems.

    mustascheman commented on Sound of River

    05-03-2010

    I guess life is like a river, tranquil at times, turbulant at other times. Nice piece of work here. I admit I had some trouble with some areas where some of the words were pieced together but over-all a good poem. A.T.

    jyothi

    05/05/2010

    Thanks for liking and good sugestion.

    Rhymer commented on Sound of River

    04-30-2010

    Very descriptive and interesting write. 10.....................................

    jyothi

    04/30/2010

    thanks for liking my little conscious.

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