• Loss


                             Rama's name lies in my mind
                           This's the name that's linked with me

                           One with generousity and kindness in heart 

                          Worried for others than one ownself
                          A bold women with wide vision of life

                           Accurate destination of right  purpose
                           My chidhood friend I remember most
                            Born with silver spoon but behave common

                           Never shows ego though have royal living
                          Passing many obstacles married childhood lover
                         Devoted mother and friendly wife
                       As we love her God loved more

                       Struggle with disease had to leave the world

                       Leaving us unknown path to worship you. 



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    freemansvoice commented on Rama


    to live unselfishly should be a goal for all. sorry for the worlds loss.



    Ty for reliazing the thought of lossing the dear one.

    ginga commented on Rama


    jyothi, I felt I was reading one's diary. Excellent reflections on life. ginga

    Rhymer commented on Rama


    Touching and well written poem,................ten from me.

    SuSpence commented on Rama


    This is a very touching poem and a wonderful tribute to what sounds like a dear friend and a kind soul. Your heart may be weak with sorrow but your words are strong with poetic prowess.



    I wasn't expecting such colorful comment from new friend.Thanks.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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