The Flying Mind

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    The Flying Mind

                                    This flying mind can't stay in one place
                                    
                                    Roaming here and there in the space

                                  Sometime desperate ,sometime frightened 

                                 Sudden steps of happiness for fickle time


                                Like tides in the ocean dancing near the beach

                              Whipping all whatever comes near about with roaring

                             Next become calm and docile as nothing here

                             Regular task's  done without anything seen

                           
                       What it's searching for never coming rays of hope?
                       
                        Why asking for fulfillment in the dense forest of sufferings?

                        Whom it's waiting for in the constant fight for life?
                       
                      How it can hide the facts in the outer clothes?

                    
                   I can control my physical appearance but not  the flying mind 

                   Every things can walk in the pattern of ways but not this mind
                    
                   The tiny mind's there flying without strings in the sky

                    Yogis and saints said they're inclined with power

                    To dominate the flying mind enhanced with wisdom
                     I don't believe the fact to conquer the mind
                    









                     




                     


                      


                  

                              


                                      

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    abraham commented on The Flying Mind

    01-10-2011

    I like the imagery used throughout. The unbridled mind! well written.
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    jyothi

    01/25/2011

    TY for lovely comment.

    Hampton commented on The Flying Mind

    01-04-2011

    This is a lovely poem. I like it a lot. It overflows with sincerity..................................Hampton
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    jyothi

    01/09/2011

    TY for comment.

    kdarcy commented on The Flying Mind

    12-31-2010

    I like the without strings line, so how do reign in the scattered thoughts bombarding for our attention, discussion and decison of our actions. Well done, be well k
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    jyothi

    01/09/2011

    TY for comment.

    ginga commented on The Flying Mind

    12-30-2010

    jyothi, Minds do race and fly, so much to ponder and consider. I like how this poem expresses the anxieties we face in trying to put so many thoughts aside. Your use of nature as simile is commended. ginga
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    jyothi

    01/09/2011

    TY for comment.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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