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  • Sadness

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    The numbness i feel
    just as real
    though not physical
    it's so pitiful
    the things you do
    they hurt me too
    the things you say
    day by day
    it keeps getting worse
    like a curse
    what's happened to me
    it shouldn't be
    the way it burns
    how it churn and churns
    my hatred for you
    it's nothing new
    it won't go away
    forever it'll stay
    the way it feels inside
    as if, i've died

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    Phoenix9 commented on It

    02-17-2009

    very good, keep it up
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    cottonluv commented on It

    02-17-2009

    thats a sad poem.but i like it a lot.good work
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    chadallac74 commented on It

    02-16-2009

    Way to go out there on a limb... nice rhytym to it.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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