Loves Circle

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Loves Circle

She was radiant as a light
Loved everyone with all her might
Full of life ......and endless love
Now sits on high.... with God above
Awesome spirit .....wonderful sight
Healer to anyone who spoke of their plight
To those she left behind she's say
Love each other for more then the day

For was is the world.... if one cannot love?
What is the reason ....we are sent from above?
To give and receive ...the lessons in life
Hearts break sometimes...as though cut with a knife
Travel afar...and struggle anew
Share our love .... with many or few
Share with the heart.....feel with the soul
Give of ourselves.....even when we grow old

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SavVySam commented on Loves Circle

08-04-2009

Wonderful...Thank you for sharing a beautiful glimpse into the wonder you beheld! May God Bless and keep you!

JJMann commented on Loves Circle

07-24-2009

It is a challenge when the magnitude of the loss vastly outweighs verbal sensibilities - yet we are compelled to express these difficult losses to glean the love and wisdom gained at such a price. And so you have passed on this message of love that we may yet have hope and forgiveness in this hardscrabble mortal sphere. Thanks, Mufasa. And - your painting is excellent as well!

optimistic commented on Loves Circle

07-23-2009

This was Excellent very great ryhme and metaphors in this piece I enjoy the passion behind your words of inspiration.

Hampton commented on Loves Circle

07-22-2009

A very nicely written poetic writing covering a multitude of issues centered on love and life,

mufasa

07/22/2009

I am touched by your kind words.I write from the heart,but feel with the soul.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

mufasa’s Poems (41)

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Open Doors 1
Hearts on Fire 2
The man next door 1
REMEMBER ME 1
WOMEN OF THE WORLD 1
SATIRE 2
CATCH THE FIRE 1
Silhouettes 3
Golden Future 2
Passion for Home 3
Heart and Soul 3
Our Greater Treasure 2
BLACK LISTED 3
THE LANGUAGE OF LOVE 6
Waiting 6
THE OLD HOUSE 4
Demons of the world. 3
Long ago and far away 5
Hypocrites 3
Insatiable Lover 9
Free Spirit 4
My son 4
Hurricane 1
Woman 1
My Dragon 2
Wrapped in darkness 2
Puzzles 3
Soldier 9
Human 4
The I of Being 4
Games 8
Stars 6
Conflict 2
Loves Circle 4
Hearts desire 2
If 5
Life 3
Dreamer 1
Passions 2
Earthdreams 7