Stars

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    Stars

    If I could count a million stars in the sky......I would
    If it meant I could be close with you
    You are an enigma
    Hard to understand
    Complex....and yet when I am with you
    that feeling of comfort
    and familiarity is always there
    Yet so much of your life I am left
    to paint pictures of
    So I am left with fantasies
    All good of course
    how can they not be
    i am the master writer
    So  I will only paint
    What bring me pleasure
    Perhaps it is best this way
    No heart gets broken
    And frienship can thrive

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Stars

    04-26-2010

    Seriously,,,, this is junk!!!!! .. and i am sooo kidding.. it's wonderful,, you must have a book or two?
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    mufasa

    04/26/2010

    Lovely I laughed so hard,when I read this .it made forget my asthma for a minute.you are wonderfull,thank you. I am a single Mom and even though parts of my life have been sad,it causes me to grow in spirit every day. I am blessed in so many other ways by good friends a great job.and friends in poetry, Blessings to you and yours.

    WordSlinger commented on Stars

    07-30-2009

    I like this one also, this one takes me to good place, ty, :)
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    Wallysaruman commented on Stars

    07-30-2009

    This is full o feeling... and again, you've touched me personally with this poem. I tell you, Sandra. No poet, painter or musician can truly create something inspiring without having the life experiences only hardship brings you. When you've suffered, you appreciate happiness on a different level and the same is true for most every emotion.
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    optimistic commented on Stars

    07-23-2009

    The picture you painted in this poem I'm guessing you were speaking of the stars that bring you this passion? this piece was kind of sad yet great point keep writing.
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    rollerderby commented on Stars

    07-22-2009

    painting happiness and pictures of love doesn't always mean your happy. We all have memories that make us happy. But it's love that makes the world go round. Paint on my deaar. Your words are beautiful!!!
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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