Puzzles

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    This is about trust,someone either trust you ,or they do not. if not there is nothing you will ever be able to say to make them understand who you are.its a sad thing.

    Puzzles

    You question where I am going
    And also where I've been
    I have not had to defend myself
    To either foe or friend
    And what I try to tell you
    You won't believe is true
    So if at times I don't divulge
    What has happened in my life
    It's because I live in the present
    Don't want a world of strife

    If utopia were a country
    And one could travel there
    You'd be a seasoned traveler
    Just wouldn't pay the fare

    We all have our illusions
    Of how things could have been
    But courage takes a stronger heart
    And not all of us can win

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    SavVySam commented on Puzzles

    11-09-2009

    OOH! I love the independent attitude, demanding to just be who you are! What a perfect gem in the middle of a sassy piece-"If utopia were a country and one could travel there You'd be a seasoned traveler Just wouldn't pay the fare!" ZING! Great write!

    Iliketoflyaway commented on Puzzles

    09-14-2009

    WOW !! I DEFINTELY CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM. IT IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL

    mufasa

    09/14/2009

    Thanks for comment.Written with lots emotion.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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