Waiting

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    Waiting

    The breathe of your kiss .... upon my brow
    The soft touch of your tongue. ... as it travels across my lips
    The feel of our hearts ..... beating as one
    These things I remember .... while you are gone

    They feed my mind,and breathe life into my heart
    And I wonder sometimes ..... how did this start?
    Then I recall how it felt ..... when you were near
    How the passions we shared ... sometimes ... I coul hardly bear
    And I wonder at times ... did you feel it to?
    Or is this feeling of love ... to good to be true?

    Interesting .... to remember only the good
    Because sometimes,when you were with me
    Your heart felt like wood

    Such a difference you see....when you want to be
    The man that you would ...like me to see
    We all have our faults.... of these things I know
    And sometimes it seems ....you would want me to be slow

    I would like to pretend, that the first sentences ... last all the time
    But we are just people ... and not a good wine
    That ages well ... and taste quite divine

    While you and I step back in time...to a past we regret...and things left undone
    Both understanding .... how far we have come
    So I try to hold on  ...to the tangible things
    The lesson's I "ve learned ...  the love that we bring
    A place in the other's life ...and to laugh
    To feel the fire ...... as it burns deep within
    I long for your touch
    Can"t wait   ...... To begin 

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    fromthespirit commented on Waiting

    05-14-2010

    This poem conveys many emotions of love, hope, and the good and bad that is expressed in most loving relationships. Very well written.

    Balladeer commented on Waiting

    04-30-2010

    What a tender and touching poem, filled with so many different emotions. Yes, when we remember back it's always the good things that come to mind first....thank God! Excellent writing, miss.

    mufasa

    04/30/2010

    I am humbled.... that you took the time to read my poem.Thank you for the nice comment.

    WordSlinger commented on Waiting

    04-29-2010

    It is good to remember the good, may they wash away the bad, ty WS

    mufasa

    04/30/2010

    Too true ,thanks for reading and rating this one.

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Waiting

    04-29-2010

    This is a really neat poem.Thank you for inviting me to read it.I liked it.

    dumplin commented on Waiting

    04-27-2010

    I read this yesterday and attempted to comment, but it wouldn't let me. So I read it again today and I loved it twice. There are several spelling errors, but overall, well written!

    mufasa

    04/27/2010

    Thanks so much .I will try to pay closer attention next time.when I try to spell check it just never works on my PC.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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