Woman

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I feel this poem makes so many people shy away from the truth of it.
but having been in a long term abusive relationship,and finaly gettting out was hard. I liken this abuse to cult like tendecy.one leader .one follower.you just have to get deprogrammed,and no its not an easy thing,but it can happen.

Woman

Hold me......Scold me
Slowly enfold me
Wrap the strings around my heart

Now pull me up
Like a puppet
On a string
There.....I'm lost
Cannot feel a thing
We love with the heart...the soul......our head?
Can we remember
Once they are dead?

So amuse me.....abuse me
Then ever so slowly ....... lose me

Disposable life
Was once
Your wife

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SavVySam commented on Woman

11-04-2009

Praise God your getting out of it! You show great courage and strength bringing this awful subject into the light. Maybe it will help another also dealing with their own pain. Best of luck-I hope you understand that I cannot rate this piece...It is just too important!

mufasa

11/04/2009

Thank you so much much for your comment.having been on my own,I try to help others.its such a taboo subject all over the world.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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