Woman

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    I feel this poem makes so many people shy away from the truth of it.
    but having been in a long term abusive relationship,and finaly gettting out was hard. I liken this abuse to cult like tendecy.one leader .one follower.you just have to get deprogrammed,and no its not an easy thing,but it can happen.

    Woman

    Hold me......Scold me
    Slowly enfold me
    Wrap the strings around my heart

    Now pull me up
    Like a puppet
    On a string
    There.....I'm lost
    Cannot feel a thing
    We love with the heart...the soul......our head?
    Can we remember
    Once they are dead?

    So amuse me.....abuse me
    Then ever so slowly ....... lose me

    Disposable life
    Was once
    Your wife

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    SavVySam commented on Woman

    11-04-2009

    Praise God your getting out of it! You show great courage and strength bringing this awful subject into the light. Maybe it will help another also dealing with their own pain. Best of luck-I hope you understand that I cannot rate this piece...It is just too important!
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    mufasa

    11/04/2009

    Thank you so much much for your comment.having been on my own,I try to help others.its such a taboo subject all over the world.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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