Long ago and far away

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    Long ago and far away

     You were once my charming king
    And I your lovely queen
    But it seems the life we are living now
    Means it must have been a dream
    We both say ......the other one is to blame
    For messing things up this way
    Yet just the other day .....I caught you... kissing her at the quay
    You think the people do not see
    You hide around and play

    I was once your only one
    And you let her.... take that away
    So where must I go now ?
    To mend the pieces of my broken heart?
    It looks as though you plannned this
    Right from the very start
    You have the one ..... you say you've loved
    From childhood days of youth
    Yet you both live in different places
    Must take the plane by route
    So tell me ...what the hell happened?
    To your plans and schemes and dreams?

    Looks like you made room
    For the devil to enter your home
    Now you live in Paris
    While she still lives in Rome
    So let me tell you baby
    For all things that were once free
    Now you pay the price
    For the things you took from me

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    kdarcy commented on Long ago and far away

    08-01-2010

    Direct and to the point, put blame where it belongs, pick up your boot straps ... for you deserve better. A truthful write is good, that is life for all of us
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    Mandi commented on Long ago and far away

    05-22-2010

    Lifie seems to be the same whereever one goes. Peole don't change a nd the loyal ones seem to be the exception to the rules in this day and age.
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    SavVySam commented on Long ago and far away

    01-08-2010

    What goes around comes around as they say! Like an arrow from a quiver you made your point felt! Very Good work!
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    eikenbes commented on Long ago and far away

    12-04-2009

    You go girl!!! That's the woman I love and admire! ;)
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    Vincent commented on Long ago and far away

    11-28-2009

    Betrail, a hard pill to swallow, some men don't realize they have the perfect diamond, so they look for a better one, only to find it is made of glass, a fake, and so it breaks, Then they come to one conclusion, I'm such an idiot, but the diamond continues to shine, because she is real. a great piece, keep the sparkle. smiles Vincent
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