Wishing Upon Words

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So im here in the library thinking about this guy... I dont have time to edit it, i dont think i should because these words just came out. Why fix words that came sraight from the heart..? Tell me what you think..

Wishing Upon Words

When I think of him

I wish the words sorry could erase the past

I wish the words I love you were strong enough to help us last.

When I feel alone

I wish the words I need you would make him appear

I wish the words goodbye didn’t fill me with fear

When I dream

I wish the words kiss me, allowed me to feel his lips against mine

I wish the words hold me, allowed me to feel safe in his arms, freezing time

When I cry..

I wish the words I miss you would bring him back

When I think of him

I wish I didn’t leave

I wish he wouldn’t of let me

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HarverTomsson commented on Wishing Upon Words

12-14-2010

Older sadder wiser- words that poets know too well. Harv

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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