You Need To Notice

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    You Need To Notice

     Apparently I'm lying
    when i say im trying
    I'm not perfect enough for my dad
    That makes me so damn mad
    That's why i sleep all day
    because we got nothing nice to say
    and I'm sick of it
    you say all i do is bitch
    well all you do is complain
    you and i aren't the same
    we no longer see eye to eye
    and now all i do is secretly cry
    you no longer understand me
    no your right, I'm not the best i can be
    but im only 15
    let me make my mistakes
    if that's what it takes
    but dont make me feel like shit
    by making a whole list
    of what you think I'm doing wrong
    maybe that makes you feel strong
    but to me it hurts
    makes me feel like dirt
    so when i say I'm trying
    stop saying im lying
    try to open your eyes
    notice and recognize
    is it so hard to believe
    damn it just let me be me

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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