With You

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  • Happiness
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  • Friendship
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  • Passion
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  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    Well i wrote a peom for my best friend to give to her boyfriend and this is waht it came out to

    With You

     

    baby when im with u,it seems 2 good 2 be true

    baby i never knew,i could feel the way i do

    im making myself a promise

    im never letting u go

    u might already know

    but ur the only thing thats on my mind,all the time

    Im so glad i can call you mine

     

    baby when im with u, It feels so amazing

    I can feel my heart beat raising

    Each time we touch, Each time we kiss

    I could make a whole list

    But it would be too much

    So this is what im trying to say

    baby when im with you..

    Each and every day

    The only think I knowIm just so in love with you

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    angelchaser commented on With You

    07-02-2010

    This is a very touching poem you've written, girls grasp passion so much earlier than guys do, I could never have written something like this as a teenager. Nicely done, I'll be reading more of your work.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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