Unexpressed & Hidden

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    Unexpressed & Hidden

    My mouth seems to be broken

    My real feelings go unspoken

    Even if I had the chance to say

    Everything I think each day

     

    I wouldn't know where to begin

    How much I should pull from within

    What all I should reveal

    What from my heart I should steal

     

    I want to let my world be known

    I want my self pride to be blown

    I cant seem to let it out, to speak

    But my secrets have reached its peak

     

    I'm standing here but about to fall

    Someone needs to break down my wall

    I don’t have it in me to do so

    Don’t have the strength to let it all go

     

    But someway it needs to be done

    I can no longer allow myself to run

    This is ruining every bit of me

    Making the true me hard to see

     

    I don’t know why its so hard

    To just let down my guard

    To just spill out all that I feel

    It shouldn’t be so big of a deal

     

    But it is, for a reason I don’t know

    And All I hide drags me low

    I hide exactly who I am

    My reason on why here I stand

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    brokenhearted11 commented on Unexpressed & Hidden

    08-01-2011

    I just read a few of your other poems, and this was by far my favorite. The rhythm is nice, and it flows easily and smoothly. I noticed that the spelling and grammar is perfect in this poem, as compared to a few others, which I assume may have been rushed? Anyway, fantastic job getting your feelings across in such a way pleasing to the eye.

    AshleyyBabyy

    08/06/2011

    Thank you - & Yeah every time i type these up im in a hurry lol But i just went back over all of my poems & fixed them up. Thanks (:

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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