2 Missed Texts

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    2 Missed Texts

    I get on the bus,
    pull out my phone.
    Blue and shiny,
    half my world at my fingertips.
    Hm.
    2 missed texts.
    And they're from her.
    "help. I'm in the bathroom
    and...
    I'm doing it."
    Oh shit.
    What did I miss?
    "Mallie. I'm doing it again.
    I'm sorry.
    I need help."
    What!? No!
    But..How..
    Why didn't I check?
    I ALWAYS check!
    I should have been there for her
    to text her back
    to save her frmo herself.
    She needed me.
    I told her I'd always be there,
    and I wasn't
    So much for that.
    Why didn't I look
    at my 2 missed texts?

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    CasperB commented on 2 Missed Texts

    03-03-2011

    AMAZING! I've felt so much alike for this so many times in my life and this captures everything I felt at those times. 10/10

    brokenhearted11

    03/03/2011

    thanks. i'm not sucha fan of this one, but its really... reality filled i guess.

    ImStillHere commented on 2 Missed Texts

    10-27-2010

    Wow. This is a great poem, like really great. You get the feeling of helplessness and guilt, trying to be the hero, the protector, but failing... Bravo. ~Audrey

    brokenhearted11

    10/27/2010

    thanks, thats exactly what i was trying to portray.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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