A Tribute To Our Victory

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    Dedicated to four special friends I met when I went back to school. The 5 of us had every class together for the entire journey all the way to graduation. We became friends, support system, advice givers, and big time laughing buddies.

    A Tribute To Our Victory

     I know there was a reason

    It was somehow meant to be

    This journey made together

    Contrived by destiny

     Separately deciding together

    To follow the same road

    First fate gave us timing

    Our friendship next bestowed.

     A room filled with strangers

    Almost magically we became

    A group of souls united

    All so different, yet the same

     We each have been a sculptor

    In this story to be told

    Starting out as grains of sand

    Now statues to behold

     A bond so very special

    Together we reached our goal

    A part of you I take with me

    Separately in body, sisters in soul

     

     

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    SuSpence commented on A Tribute To Our Victory

    12-11-2010

    A beautiful tribute to friendship. It is amazing, how it seems like people come into our lives, and we could not imagine our lives without them, or remember what life was life before them. I have thought about this a lot, I love music, and I have seen this in that realm as well. The story of the Beatles for example, how John Lennon plays a gig at a Church festival, and Paul McCartney just happens along to see him and becomes enamoured, both only 17 and 16 respectively. And the rest is history. And Bob Marley and the Wailers as well. Bob Marley, Peter Tosh, and Bunny Wailer all brilliant in thier own right grew up within just a few streets of each other, and like the Beatles somehow magically found each other to blend thier styles and talents to create music/art/poetry which would go on to change the world. Could this be coincidence? Possibly, but I think there is something deeper. People come and people go in our lives for a pletheora of reasons. But some come in and stay, and it almost feels like destiny/fate that they were sent to us. Great write. Peace and Love, Spence
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    julieannetx

    12/11/2010

    I agree...I hope these friends are gonna be "stayers"! And you are right, many amazing things have evolved from people coming together by what we call "chance"...I like to think many of these meetings were events occurring for a reason in a much bigger plan than we can imagine!

    blackfootlady commented on A Tribute To Our Victory

    11-27-2010

    Ha! That Poem was written well.Notice it says sisters,lol! Not Brothers,lol! Now You know why busy bees sick together to make Honey.Just In very good mood.Keep writting!Very well composed.God Bless,Black
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    dahlusion commented on A Tribute To Our Victory

    11-27-2010

    beautifully composed and delivered; a poetic gem! looking forward...
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    kdarcy commented on A Tribute To Our Victory

    11-20-2010

    That was touching, in a better world- this would repeat over and over for everyone throughout their entire lives. Great write, got a minute- read me, be well k
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    Teardrops commented on A Tribute To Our Victory

    11-18-2010

    There is something special about you that comes out in your poetry .i will be coming by to read again Marie
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    julieannetx

    11/18/2010

    Thank you Marie.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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