Look to the light
As twilight falls
Those hallowed times
In stable stalls
The risen one
Brings life to all

A river runs
It's given course
While flowing freely
From the source

Of all...

Look to the light
As dark descends
The world we know
In blindness tends
To overlook
What love extends

To us, unworthy
Sheep who cry
The shepherd hears
Our troubled sigh

He mends...


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SavVySam commented on Advent


I am not sure how I missed this one a Christmas, but it is an amazingly wonderful read anytime, and one I am glad I found! Thanks for sharing!



Thank you, Sam. I am so glad you took time to find and read this, and thanks for your always welcome comments...

simoneaugustus commented on Advent


'The shepherd hears our troubled sigh...' This speaks beautifully to faith. The hope and comfort is palpable.



Faith... that's what it's all about... thanks for the peaceful comment. So much appreciated!

tierra7 commented on Advent


Lovely...just my dear Lady Blooming Sun are a true artist...of livin' words...yes,,,HE MENDS.... Namaste..Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )



Great to hear from you, Tierra, thanks very much for your read and gracious words... peace

ginga commented on Advent


bloomingsun, A wondrous and beautiful poem about God's light to celebrate the true meaning of Christmas. ginga



Thanks, Ginga, for reading and for your sweet comment... much appreciated!

kmooney commented on Advent


A very nice poem for the season. Well crafted. I can feel the the Lord throughout. Thanks so much for sharing it with us... Kevin



Thanks for reading this. Your comments are always appreciated!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

bloomingsun’s Poems (29)

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Title Comments
Spilling Light 2
Delivery 2
Gathering Light 9
Spring Haiku 2
Touchstone 5
Promises 1
Let Us See 4
Summary 3
Gift 7
Plea for Peace; a villanelle 7
Her Escape 16
Confession 7
Out of Our Hands 7
Child of Longing 6
Wait 5
Advent 13
haiku 7
Beach 8
Vows 4
Let Down Again 4
Just Thinking 3
Muse 3
Blossoms 3
The Power of a Flower 5
Heaven's Beach 8
Her Heart 2
Renewal 5
breaking 6
Morning on the Dock 9