The wind
breath of life that
pours across the water,
lifts up over the mountain,
filters so swiftly through
restless, edgy pines,
swaying birches...
to flow with

through my
open window

a gift
a blessing
an invitation
to breathe
and live

and smile,
at the faithfulness
of God.


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RHPeat commented on Delivery


Creation is perfect, we only need to recognize it. a poet friend// RH Peat

ginga commented on Delivery


BS, As you may or may not know, I ove nature poems. And the nature of this poem is the beauty of the earth. ty ginga



Thank you, Ginga, for reading this. I also love nature poems, as many of own reflect. I am grateful for your comment and will be coming by soon to see what's new on your poem list... your work never fails to impress me. ~Peace~

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

bloomingsun’s Poems (29)

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Title Comments
Spilling Light 2
Delivery 2
Gathering Light 9
Spring Haiku 2
Touchstone 5
Promises 1
Let Us See 4
Summary 3
Gift 7
Plea for Peace; a villanelle 7
Her Escape 16
Confession 7
Out of Our Hands 7
Child of Longing 6
Wait 5
Advent 13
haiku 7
Beach 8
Vows 4
Let Down Again 4
Just Thinking 3
Muse 3
Blossoms 3
The Power of a Flower 5
Heaven's Beach 8
Her Heart 2
Renewal 5
breaking 6
Morning on the Dock 9