Just Thinking

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Although I usually prefer a more loosely flowing form, sometimes it just doesn't come out that way.  

Just Thinking

Just Thinking

The chill seeps damply all around
Intensifying pale Apollo's frown.
Cannot the names of martyrs be forgot?
Or is it now for us to wonder what

Becomes of those who fled the world before
The rest of us could knock upon their door?
I in my dissentient soul-of-soul
Care nothing for their rambling control.

We cannot question all we ever see
Yet somehow must discover where the key
Waits to fill the darkness (is it reason?)
With the bursting forth of every season.

I lost you as time melted on and on
So the searching goes (you are not gone!)
Until the star of the eastern way
Is lost to the blossoming light of day...

MLS

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tierra7 commented on Just Thinking

01-06-2010

bloomingsun, this is fabulous....very nice...i really enjoyed it...it brought out some awareness...ty for sharin' hun..... NAMASTE...Terra@}-'-,- (10+ )

knight4696 commented on Just Thinking

12-27-2009

Ahhh ... a Very interesting write ... I love how it makes me stop and think. Different from others I have read of yours ... not that - that's a bad thing .. this is one of my faves! Great Job!

bloomingsun

12/27/2009

Thank you, thank you... so glad you liked it. It is a rather different one for me, it's true.

danmartyjake1 commented on Just Thinking

12-10-2009

This is poignant and pondering all at once. I enjoyed the searching part and the questions posed..........

bloomingsun

12/11/2009

This is a different style for me, I don't usually find such form, so I am glad to hear you like it. Thanks...

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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