Gift

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Gift


comfort sought is often found
in, about, amid, around

within the test
let peace surround

take it, hold it, let it mend
own it, feel it, learn to bend

on faith
and grace of God depend

MLS

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BringMeBullets commented on Gift

04-16-2010

How beautiful... You have a way with shaping words into wonderful things like flowers and rays of sun... You are a great poet. Thank you for sharing.

bloomingsun

04/18/2010

Thank you, BMB for your lovely and thoughtful comment... you made my day!

ginga commented on Gift

03-24-2010

bsun, I love the soft tenderness that emanates from this mellow and wondrous poem. ginga

bloomingsun

03/24/2010

Thank you, Ginga, for reading and commenting on this little verse.

simoneaugustus commented on Gift

03-22-2010

Beautiful words of faith. Great read!

bloomingsun

03/23/2010

Thanks Simone, it's good to hear from you.

Marsink commented on Gift

03-22-2010

Very succinct and cuting to the chase of all needs be said so very deftly with poise and pace (and grace). Thanks for sharing!

bloomingsun

03/22/2010

Thank you, Marck for visiting and for your comment. As always, your words are most welcome!

SavVySam commented on Gift

02-24-2010

This is a gem of faith you've given to us...wise words! Nice work!

bloomingsun

02/24/2010

Thank you, SSam, it's always good to hear from you!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

bloomingsun’s Poems (29)

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Spilling Light 2
Delivery 2
Gathering Light 9
Spring Haiku 2
Touchstone 5
Promises 1
Let Us See 4
Summary 3
Gift 7
Plea for Peace; a villanelle 7
Her Escape 16
Confession 7
Out of Our Hands 7
Child of Longing 6
Wait 5
Advent 13
haiku 7
Beach 8
Vows 4
Let Down Again 4
Just Thinking 3
Muse 3
Blossoms 3
The Power of a Flower 5
Heaven's Beach 8
Her Heart 2
Renewal 5
breaking 6
Morning on the Dock 9