Let Us See

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Let Us See

Transformative!
a simple sunray
illuminates the obvious depths
... of love
the Creator exhibits
for His creatures

Artistry beyond compare
on clear display, everywhere
for those...
who can see

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stefy commented on Let Us See

05-18-2010

Very interesting and deep...............................................................

bloomingsun

05/18/2010

Thank you, Stefy, for reading and commenting, it is always nice to hear from a new friend!

gogant commented on Let Us See

04-19-2010

Sometimes one cannot see the trees for the forest, but if will just admire what is here, without complexities, the beauty is only a blink away.................A nice poem you have given us, Bloom.......

bloomingsun

04/21/2010

So true, so true... the obvious hides behind us when we look for it too intently. Many thanks, gallant Gogant, for your gracious feedback.

Springsize commented on Let Us See

04-18-2010

I enjoy your simple poem, clear to read and understand, and the message... a light of Love from our Creator... the gift of sun... and then you use the wide-range camera view of "artistry... on clear display" ... so I am now going to imagine a sunrise that is magnificent... and is free and is a reverent thing and goes by every single day, and can be unnoticed by so many inside their walls that also block the rays. So very nice, how much I find your poem suggests to me...

bloomingsun

04/19/2010

You really hit the mark with your comment, it is just as I meant it to be. Thanks so much for your thoughtful words and for your appreciation.

SavVySam commented on Let Us See

04-18-2010

One of those special and rare aha moments for "those who can see" the beauty of his bountiful blessings...lovely!;)

bloomingsun

04/19/2010

Yes, "aha" supremely sums this up. Thanks so much for your comment and for stopping by!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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Delivery 2
Gathering Light 9
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Touchstone 5
Promises 1
Let Us See 4
Summary 3
Gift 7
Plea for Peace; a villanelle 7
Her Escape 16
Confession 7
Out of Our Hands 7
Child of Longing 6
Wait 5
Advent 13
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Beach 8
Vows 4
Let Down Again 4
Just Thinking 3
Muse 3
Blossoms 3
The Power of a Flower 5
Heaven's Beach 8
Her Heart 2
Renewal 5
breaking 6
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