As the sun rises
the promises and
for this new day
pierce the departing
with a breath of light
with a smile
of hope.

We are blessed...

to seek the light
to follow the sun
to step forward
into the morning
expecting abundance
looking for miracles
honoring truth.


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SavVySam commented on Promises


You strike an important chord reminding us that promises by our Creator bare come with some reciprocal obligation of our own responsibilities too for such blessings...



Thanks, Sam, your always shine a lovely light with your comments, glad you came by to read... thanks again!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

bloomingsun’s Poems (29)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Spilling Light 2
Delivery 2
Gathering Light 9
Spring Haiku 2
Touchstone 5
Promises 1
Let Us See 4
Summary 3
Gift 7
Plea for Peace; a villanelle 7
Her Escape 16
Confession 7
Out of Our Hands 7
Child of Longing 6
Wait 5
Advent 13
haiku 7
Beach 8
Vows 4
Let Down Again 4
Just Thinking 3
Muse 3
Blossoms 3
The Power of a Flower 5
Heaven's Beach 8
Her Heart 2
Renewal 5
breaking 6
Morning on the Dock 9