etched with truth
sealed by submission
posted in blood

composed of moonlight
tangled in twilight
painted on the sky

exposed to the stars
splashed across the sea
drawn on our hearts

tried against the current
written in the sand
freed in tandem flight


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simoneaugustus commented on Vows


Truly beautiful. Each time I read this, I am deeply moved. This is definitely being saved to my favorites! 10+!



Wow, I am touched by your words, it is so great to hear you are able to connect to this. Thank you for your kind words.

StandingBear commented on Vows


"Vows" Wow! A very well written work pertaining to vows. Great write! Thank you bloomingsun for your vote per my poem : "into them .. into me .. into you" per survivor week 3 !! SBear



Thank you StandingBear, I am grateful. Your welcome for the vote, your poem was truly deserving! ...peace...

knight4696 commented on Vows


Beautiful!!! Love the form and flow of this one. Another very nice piece. Great Job! .... Ken



Thank you, your comments are most welcome!

HarverTomsson commented on Vows


Parsimonious and effective. This one could have gone by telegram!



(chuckling) yes, I tried to be minimal with words on a large topic. Thanks!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

bloomingsun’s Poems (29)

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Title Comments
Spilling Light 2
Delivery 2
Gathering Light 9
Spring Haiku 2
Touchstone 5
Promises 1
Let Us See 4
Summary 3
Gift 7
Plea for Peace; a villanelle 7
Her Escape 16
Confession 7
Out of Our Hands 7
Child of Longing 6
Wait 5
Advent 13
haiku 7
Beach 8
Vows 4
Let Down Again 4
Just Thinking 3
Muse 3
Blossoms 3
The Power of a Flower 5
Heaven's Beach 8
Her Heart 2
Renewal 5
breaking 6
Morning on the Dock 9