Vows

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Vows

Vows

etched with truth
sealed by submission
posted in blood

composed of moonlight
tangled in twilight
painted on the sky

exposed to the stars
splashed across the sea
drawn on our hearts

tried against the current
written in the sand
freed in tandem flight

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simoneaugustus commented on Vows

03-22-2010

Truly beautiful. Each time I read this, I am deeply moved. This is definitely being saved to my favorites! 10+!

bloomingsun

03/23/2010

Wow, I am touched by your words, it is so great to hear you are able to connect to this. Thank you for your kind words.

StandingBear commented on Vows

01-23-2010

"Vows" Wow! A very well written work pertaining to vows. Great write! Thank you bloomingsun for your vote per my poem : "into them .. into me .. into you" per survivor week 3 !! SBear

bloomingsun

01/23/2010

Thank you StandingBear, I am grateful. Your welcome for the vote, your poem was truly deserving! ...peace...

knight4696 commented on Vows

12-27-2009

Beautiful!!! Love the form and flow of this one. Another very nice piece. Great Job! .... Ken

bloomingsun

12/27/2009

Thank you, your comments are most welcome!

HarverTomsson commented on Vows

12-07-2009

Parsimonious and effective. This one could have gone by telegram!

bloomingsun

12/08/2009

(chuckling) yes, I tried to be minimal with words on a large topic. Thanks!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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