Renewal

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    Comments and suggestions welcome and appreciated. Thanks.

    Renewal

     water and wind
    elemental promises
    born of God
    spirit-wise
    acting to humanize

    beyond our ken
    to shift and altar us
    grounding fallenness
    raising our reach
    as we beseech

    though half-aware
    we know we are led
    to seek the sky
    while here below
    longing for the reign-bow

    MLS
    2009

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    Hampton commented on Renewal

    12-12-2009

    A lovely poem you have composed here. Please read my poem by the same title. Peace. Hampton
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    bloomingsun

    12/13/2009

    Thanks for your kind comment, I will be happy to read yours. And peace also to you!

    gogant commented on Renewal

    12-12-2009

    In every heart there is a longing to be away in that favored land. I can see over the misty horizon with your words.......................g
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    bloomingsun

    12/13/2009

    Thanks, Gogant for your appreciative read!

    countrypoet commented on Renewal

    11-20-2009

    Our appreciation and wonder at all of nature help us to realize that we are being led to a consciousness of a higher power.Thank you for sharing this beautiful and wonderfully inspiring poem.
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    bloomingsun

    11/21/2009

    Yes, you got it. It is about being led, thank you for your insightful comments; glad you enjoyed it!

    mamasan commented on Renewal

    11-19-2009

    Yes your words are deliberate and perhaps sometimes that elusive rainbow just seems to be where Judy Garland said: somewhere over the rainbow way up high......nice read and it talks to you and lets you talk back to it.............
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    bloomingsun

    11/20/2009

    Thank you Mamasan, for your kind and thoughtful comment. Much appreciated!

    jademelissa74 commented on Renewal

    11-13-2009

    A powerful content indeed. You speak through wisdom of ages that is well conveyed throughout the entire poem. Great job!
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    bloomingsun

    11/13/2009

    So glad you liked it; I wasn't sure anyone would get this one, it is kind of obscure. Thanks!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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