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Comments and suggestions welcome and appreciated. Thanks.


water and wind
elemental promises
born of God
acting to humanize

beyond our ken
to shift and altar us
grounding fallenness
raising our reach
as we beseech

though half-aware
we know we are led
to seek the sky
while here below
longing for the reign-bow


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Hampton commented on Renewal


A lovely poem you have composed here. Please read my poem by the same title. Peace. Hampton



Thanks for your kind comment, I will be happy to read yours. And peace also to you!

gogant commented on Renewal


In every heart there is a longing to be away in that favored land. I can see over the misty horizon with your words.......................g



Thanks, Gogant for your appreciative read!

countrypoet commented on Renewal


Our appreciation and wonder at all of nature help us to realize that we are being led to a consciousness of a higher power.Thank you for sharing this beautiful and wonderfully inspiring poem.



Yes, you got it. It is about being led, thank you for your insightful comments; glad you enjoyed it!

mamasan commented on Renewal


Yes your words are deliberate and perhaps sometimes that elusive rainbow just seems to be where Judy Garland said: somewhere over the rainbow way up high......nice read and it talks to you and lets you talk back to it.............



Thank you Mamasan, for your kind and thoughtful comment. Much appreciated!

jademelissa74 commented on Renewal


A powerful content indeed. You speak through wisdom of ages that is well conveyed throughout the entire poem. Great job!



So glad you liked it; I wasn't sure anyone would get this one, it is kind of obscure. Thanks!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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