Blossoms

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Blossoms

Blossoms

Showy blossoms
pink and fair
scent-caress
a springtime air
at the sun's touch
opening wide
sweetly blushing
as a bride
blossoms, blossoms
I confess
such perfect trust
few possess...

MLS

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Oblaidon commented on Blossoms

11-17-2009

I like this one. Nice metaphore for trust. I give it a 10!

bloomingsun

11/17/2009

Thank you! So glad you liked it.

kmooney commented on Blossoms

11-17-2009

Marvelous, simply marvelous. I love the simplicity and complexitiy of this one. Very light and fun to read. I love the springtime as all God's beauty comes to life. There nothing more beautiful than witnessing a sleeping garden suddenly blossoming everywhere. I have one called Overture of Spring that you might enjoy. If you read it, note that it is an acrostic (the first letters of every line form a phrase). Thanks so much for sharing.... Kevin

bloomingsun

11/17/2009

Thank you for your gracious comments! I am so glad you enjoyed it. I will check out your suggestions asap.

mamasan commented on Blossoms

11-16-2009

Nice words and so descriptive that I could see the and drink in the scent from their blushing pink leaves. A brief passage that turned out perfection in the form of a blossom.

bloomingsun

11/16/2009

Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

bloomingsun’s Poems (29)

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Title Comments
Spilling Light 2
Delivery 2
Gathering Light 9
Spring Haiku 2
Touchstone 5
Promises 1
Let Us See 4
Summary 3
Gift 7
Plea for Peace; a villanelle 7
Her Escape 16
Confession 7
Out of Our Hands 7
Child of Longing 6
Wait 5
Advent 13
haiku 7
Beach 8
Vows 4
Let Down Again 4
Just Thinking 3
Muse 3
Blossoms 3
The Power of a Flower 5
Heaven's Beach 8
Her Heart 2
Renewal 5
breaking 6
Morning on the Dock 9