Blossoms

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    Blossoms

     Blossoms

    Showy blossoms
    pink and fair
    scent-caress
    a springtime air
    at the sun's touch
    opening wide
    sweetly blushing
    as a bride
    blossoms, blossoms
    I confess
    such perfect trust
    few possess...

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    Oblaidon commented on Blossoms

    11-17-2009

    I like this one. Nice metaphore for trust. I give it a 10!
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    bloomingsun

    11/17/2009

    Thank you! So glad you liked it.

    kmooney commented on Blossoms

    11-17-2009

    Marvelous, simply marvelous. I love the simplicity and complexitiy of this one. Very light and fun to read. I love the springtime as all God's beauty comes to life. There nothing more beautiful than witnessing a sleeping garden suddenly blossoming everywhere. I have one called Overture of Spring that you might enjoy. If you read it, note that it is an acrostic (the first letters of every line form a phrase). Thanks so much for sharing.... Kevin
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    bloomingsun

    11/17/2009

    Thank you for your gracious comments! I am so glad you enjoyed it. I will check out your suggestions asap.

    mamasan commented on Blossoms

    11-16-2009

    Nice words and so descriptive that I could see the and drink in the scent from their blushing pink leaves. A brief passage that turned out perfection in the form of a blossom.
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    bloomingsun

    11/16/2009

    Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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