An offer to the lost

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    An offer to the lost

    An Offer To The Lost

     

    Today I feel like a guy

    A person like every other

     

    It’s a winter wonderland

    And yet it just seems like any other

     

    I find my eyes follow the beat of a wing

    A lone chickadee fighting through the bitter chill.

     

    Alas it probably saw it futility as I have

    Almost sorrowful I watch it flutter to the cold.

     

    As I crept near, it doesn’t run, doesn’t flee

    A plantain peel in hand, I offer a final meal.

     

    It ate with relish, did it forget its circumstance

    I left it to dine on the sparse meat, shunning my gluttony.

     

    Two steps from the door and into a cave of warmth

    I imagined its feathers, rustled from its shivering.

     

    I turned back to save it, or at least see it

    There was nothing to do, but maybe?

     

    Stopping in my tracks, the feeling of guilt, faded

    It’s just nature’s way.

     

    Life has always walked with the fittest, that of which I am not

    But there is some pride in gifting the lost a last morsel.

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    Tony5880 commented on An offer to the lost

    01-29-2013

    kind of deep.emotion felt, good write i like it hey check out my new poem tell me what ya think be hoest i need to learn!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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