Unaware helplessness

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Unaware helplessness

She walks
Unaware
Of what lies
In her future
A slave
To fate
Never
A second thought
To alter
An untapped destiny
To break free
Released
Of the chains
To rewrite a path
With her own hands

"She finally did..but apparently I was nessisary anymore"

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CMarsh commented on Unaware helplessness

09-02-2009

We all carry our own cross and some just can't see it or feel it until its to late. Some ignore their fate and rebel against those who try to guide them to the light...very nice write

Pisces00

09/02/2009

Thank you....

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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