Immortal

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Immortal

I wish to be free
My soul to be released
From these mortal shackles
To dream for eternity
In a world of fantasy
My final heaven

The winds of change
Shall hold no soverienty
Over the blessed memories
My heart holds
Destined to linger
Long after my shadow's presence fades
Alive in the hearts of those
I chose to pass on a legacy
Like angel tears
Crystaline star fragments
Are delivered with dormant memories
Down as a blanket of soft snow
To many tis just frozen rain
Yet those I love must learn to see it
As how much of my heart
They have touched by their spirits
Even when my heart feels burned to the core
Even when my soul freezes over
To my very essense
Stabbing my hopes and dreams
I will not be phased
Never will my spirit budge
For my friends and their love
Become my shield
Protecting me forever
While walking the road to reality
Finding the hidden beauties
Life has to offer


To mi abuelo

As long as my heart holds strength,Destiny has no sovernty over me

Also to xxx(you know who you are)

It took a blade to the heart for me to see the world in its entirety.

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shakeme4life commented on Immortal

12-02-2010

great show of triumph through struggle, endurance, this poem is very encouraging

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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