Hidden longing

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    Hidden longing

    I see many souls
    All hearts
    Predictable
    Mediocre
    No interest in sight
    Cold and dark
    Led into shadows
    Masking my dissapointment
    With a faded grin
    As if a spirit heard my thoughts
    She appeared
    Like a moon from heaven
    Embracing my spirit
    Cleansing it
    from such oppressive chains
    Never before
    Have I gazed at such eyes
    Sapphires of pure beauty
    With a sparkle of starlight
    An aura surpassing the moon
    In its attempts
    At lighting my dark heart
    And yet as if this bliss
    Wasnt satisfying enough
    I want what I cant have
    Reaching for this godess
    Just to fall back to reality
    No such beauty can exist
    My mind echoes
    So what am I looking at
    What causes every breath of air
    To make my body light
    Once listless eyes
    To shine a shimmering marble brown
    What makes such illusions
    Fooling my arms into hugging
    What isnt in front of me

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    CMarsh commented on Hidden longing

    08-27-2009

    Like all things in life there are great risks. If you play it safe you will likely only settle for whats right in front of you. To truly love it must be unconditional and completely and you must risk it all.The reward is a love that is everlasting,the negative is a life experience that you will learn and grow from. So as you can see even the negative has a positive.

    Pisces00

    08/27/2009

    You make quite abit of sense...I just which I could see this instead of people telling me such simple concepts...But I guess thats just another one of the experiences you talk about.Thank you as your comment really means alot and Im glad to have such a consiterate critic

    Necy commented on Hidden longing

    08-26-2009

    Love has its time season and own reason you can't ask it to stay. You can only embrace it as it comes and be glad that a moment in your life it was yours.

    Pisces00

    08/26/2009

    I hear that..Im just not the person who is a risk taker ya know lmao

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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