Guardian

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Guardian

My words ride
On Waves
Soft smooth melodys
Let me guide
Your lost soul
To the borders
Of holy nirvana
The bliss of the heart
A final heaven
Come
So I may open
Once blind eyes
To destroy shackles
Of binding shadows
The symbol
Of strife and depression
Feel my embrace
Grasp my mane
Gaze
Into my eyes
Find security
Bask in my heat
Merge
With a heart
Full of unbiased love
Into the light
Of gental sanctuary

"To adenike and a few others:I know I have been hard to handle and my heart tends to rise and fall,but my eyes open with every adventure...You all have shown me who i really am.For this I will always give an embrace of gental empathy to those who feel as if there is no way out of dispair"

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CMarsh commented on Guardian

08-27-2009

Your words are deep and straight to the point...my friend all you need to be fluid with your words is experience. It comes in many forms and at many ages.Good work!

graceladymn commented on Guardian

08-26-2009

How could one with words so gentle be hard to handle? When your reach to draw out the suffering from under the beds of despair, who could find fault with you. Lovely warm words form your poem, creative work.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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