Aye Aye Captain

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    • Kandrew
    • is so sorry she's been away so long! Trying desperately to catch up!

    Aye Aye Captain

    "Aye, Aye, Captain."

    You come to me...and I to you.
    No expectations.

    Your body so close your breathing carresses me.
    I turn to you slowly.
    I have never before felt such a gentle life.

    Your eyes fall into mine seeing things I never have.
    A slight wave begins to build just beneath my breasts.
    It spreads throughout my body as if it were being poured...and it was. Closer we are drawn...one to another.
    Your mouth parts slowly.

    ...An invitation
    ...I accept
    ...The kiss begins...

    Our first encounter and I feel your hands exploring.
    Sailing seas unkown ...even to me.
    For until your lips touched mine I have not dared to raise my masses. Your wind at my back carries me...demanding submission.
    With a single exhale I know I will not fight.
    Nature is much too persistant for any mortal to resist.

    Your gentle way opens me and we steal each others soul.
    You have entered.
    You move yourself inside of me and I offer to you, what somehow has already become yours.

    The raging waters show no mercy ...and we ask for none.
    From somewhere, the gods give us the sound of Thunder and throw down to us the strikes of lightning.

    We devour their gifts in a single gulp.
    Swallowing, our internal desires become sated.
    Our very own wetness surpasses even the seas'.

    We ride the ocean waves up, up, up.
    We are reaching the peak.
    We do not want this to end-yet silently...
    We beg for release.
    We can see the land
    ...our destination.

    We close our eyes.
    The crest firmly brings us to it's climax and crashes
    ...water-to-land.
    We feel nothing...
    We feel everything.
    The human world has been destroyed
    and ours has been created.

    I turn to you again...
    "The ride is over", I say.

    You whisper...
    that it's just begun.

    "Aye, Aye, Captain"...
    (For that was just a kiss.)

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    MOMofTWINS commented on Aye Aye Captain

    11-06-2009

    This was beautifully written with passion, lust and wit. Very nice!There is a fine line between being trshy and classy, and thie piece is deffanitely very classy. Wonderful job!

    sawdust commented on Aye Aye Captain

    07-07-2009

    OMG i think im going to ask the mrs if she would like to go sailing Great write deffenaitly makes my wave crest

    FLAWLES commented on Aye Aye Captain

    06-24-2009

    Very creative. I like how you coincide copulation and riding the high seas. But tell me lassy, what do ya know, of "sea-turtles"? :)

    Kandrew

    06/26/2009

    Sea Turtles? I'm not sure I know much about them...why don't you write a poem for us about them? I'd love to read it! :)

    goinwest commented on Aye Aye Captain

    06-09-2009

    another fantastic finish I shared this link on my FaceBook our Poetry Group there search Judy McNutt or F Paul Fuhr Best fpf

    Kandrew

    06/26/2009

    Thank you! I'll check it out!

    LenaMP commented on Aye Aye Captain

    03-14-2009

    Passionate and powerful. Well written.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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