I Will Steel

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    • Kandrew
    • is so sorry she's been away so long! Trying desperately to catch up!

    I Will Steel
    “...i will steal...”

    offer to me your hands
    your gentle touch
    your smooth caress
    and i will steal your very sense

    offer to me your mouth
    your passionate kiss
    your warmth and wet
    and i will steal your very breath

    offer to me your self
    your sweat - your heat
    your salted pores
    and i will steal your very core

    but offer to me your heart
    your “forever” talk
    your “promises of”
    and i will simply steal...away

    for i am not one who takes kindly to love

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    Hiporlacking commented on I Will Steel

    07-17-2009

    This poem speaks volumes of you in only a few stanzas. It's interesting to ourselves evolve, isn't it?
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    Hiporlacking

    07/17/2009

    to watch

    raychile commented on I Will Steel

    06-08-2009

    I really like this. Strange, so many poems speak of wanting love, craving it, and you want to throw it away. It is beautifully written.
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    Kandrew

    06/26/2009

    yes, that was my life at one point. But now...I hold onto it, but gently, and tenderly. Thank you.

    bartz commented on I Will Steel

    02-24-2009

    come here, come here, come here! go away, go away, go away! the mingling of passion and fear.
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    ndg commented on I Will Steel

    01-31-2009

    Wonderful
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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