Beauty

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    Inspiration: Melissa (Issa) P.

    Written in NY

    Beauty

     Real beauty lasts forever
    So they say, however
    Long ago my beauty died
    I was left stained from when I cried
    Left in the shadows by you
    My friend who was never true
    I lie awake at night
    With in my head, a tainted sight
    Of what could have been but never was
    When you left without a pause
    By your actions, not your doings.
    I am here pondering many things
    With all amazement I lasted this long
    I turn away to wonder what went wrong
    I've tried my hardest to make it work
    You let me down, to fall in the cirque
    My beauty has withered away
    Without the one who used to convey.

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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