Forever the Father

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    Inspiration: The summer of '99. I met my father that summer, and he was so wrapped up in his alcohol, he almost let me die. By the time I got to the hospital I had already stopped breathing for 7 minutes, and almost dead.

    Written in Ut.

    Forever the Father

    Forever the father of my fright
    The cast of pain on this deadly night
    To which you spoke those crimson words
    Into the darkened shadows of this world

    My heart was broken in that year
    When your words were all that I could hear
    I tried to remember, tried to hold on
    To that place of happiness where I tried to belong

    Forever the father of my pain
    Unspoken wisdom, that you'll never gain
    The night's I've cried for you to come
    Were ignored by you and set in stone

    You left me alone beside my bed
    Where I was screaming and nearly dead
    To sit and talk and drink with your friends
    You heard the cries but never turned your heads

    Forever the father of my death
    Your name I spoke beneath my breath
    When I was young and missed you so
    But you were gone and you never knew

    You see the face of a lonely child
    Who saw the world but never smiled
    Because her father left her alone
    In a world she was forced to roam

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    Paint1954 commented on Forever the Father

    10-09-2009

    Oh honey I too had a dad who drank where the pain was ever so great. your poem sounds like my own words. great job of letting it out, many people could not have said it better, keep writing.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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