Life's Course

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    Inspiration: Getting over depression.

    Written in NY

    Life's Course

    I wish I werent around
    To make it worse with a wilted sound
    If I could, I'd kill myself tonight.
    I have a picture of a future sight
    How it shall be so misserable then
    Just as it always has been
    And when I look back, things are still the same
    Were in the sanbox playing the very same game
    Of love and hate
    And everything revolves around fate.
    But now I have a tear stained face
    From this life which we try to race
    As everything begins to fade
    I can't seem to lose the pain I've weighed.
    So I've come to a decision,
    After carefull precision.
    I shall let the plan fall in force
    And let my life take it's course.
    Withered away
    On a once perfect day
    We seem to be forgetting
    What once we cought in netting
    With beauty so fine
    But never divine.

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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