Dedicated to corbin

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    This is about when i was in high school and this boy was thrown from the back of a truck. He wasn't that old. He rode our bus and we knew his brother. Losing people are really hard. I think the few closest people were in the 6th grade, two in high school, one was before me in piano practice and she went to our church then this lady that own our golf course down our street her mother. We were really close.

    Dedicated to corbin

    I didn’t really know much about you

    But I remember your brother Justin

    You used to ride my bus

    But now your gone

    As I read other poems about you

    More people knew you then me

    But as I sit down and write this

    You shouldn’t have died like you did

    Some people can get really hurt

    More than just a broken ankle

                                                       And thrown out

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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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