DON'T TURN AWAY

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Poem Commentary

God's word is what we live and he said Revelations is coming.  Are you prepared? Is your neighbor?  My prayer is that change is so rapid that we surprise God and restore his faith in us.

DON'T TURN AWAY

Don't turn away
I am here
I speak
wisdom
into the air
for the world
to inhale
the essence
of acceptance
and the desire
of love
the word
is for all
judgment has been
cast upon me
but I be judged
by one
who's mercy
I seek
solutions
change
and deliverance
I pray
for disbelievers
to believe
for believers
to see
that the time
has come
for receiving
educating
and saving
my faith
is in the blood
that spilled
from the cross
I spread myself
and ideals
across the page
to reveal
the truth
tears of sadness
drip down
my eyes
the world
I breathe
is dying
Revelations
is near
and so I write
God is the author
of this tale
I am just a pen
a pupil
a vessel
the ending is
unknown
so don't turn away
listen
because
I may be gone
when you turn back

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jickyjack commented on DON'T TURN AWAY

09-10-2010

Besides a poet you sound like a prophet, Jeremiah crying out and falling on deaf ears. There is beauty and wisdom in what you write.

aliciagall

01/12/2011

No not a prophet... HUGE compliment... Maybe Evangelist : ) God is the author... I am just a vessel... THANKS for your comment...

Nicko7 commented on DON'T TURN AWAY

05-30-2010

Hi Aliciagall enjoyed reading this poem their be a lot of truth in your words. You can see it all happening througout the world, what it say in the book of revelations all coming upon us.By the way sorry not got back to you so long but been in Africa for a long while and not been on site anyway nice to have found you and great writing

aliciagall

01/12/2011

Africa beautiful but as you see I am just getting back to the site myself and I am glad you found time upon your return to appreciate my work... Thanks!!

NativeAmeriGirl commented on DON'T TURN AWAY

04-20-2010

Amen, So Let It Be!!!! Muy Bein on this write!!!! Your words have touch that great part of my hearts soul left only for the blessing of the poetry given to me by the Creator......Muchas gracias for sharing such an Inspirational piece.

aliciagall

04/29/2010

Thank you... I write for you...

NativeAmeriGirl

05/03/2010

De nada.....and muchas gracias for not just writting for me , but for the universe, smile......your talent is to be shared!!!

omari commented on DON'T TURN AWAY

01-25-2010

I was deeply moved by this poem..Thank your for your prayers.I am encouraged to read more of your writings...Excellent poem!!

aliciagall

02/22/2010

Please continue to read. Thanks for your comment.

Bettysrainbow48 commented on DON'T TURN AWAY

01-18-2010

I liked your poem. It does have alot of wisdom in it. Keep up the good work.

aliciagall

01/12/2011

Thanks... Wisdom WOW??

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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