HAVE YOU NOT HEARD?

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I am running after the good and the bad is running after to me but he can't catch me because of who i am running with.  BE TRUE!!

HAVE YOU NOT HEARD?

My soul is at rest.
I am weary no more.
MY mind has been set to rise
and not fall.
I stand firm on my beliefs
and even stronger in my faith.
Salvation is mine, for the take.
I can't be pushed
and I won't be deferred.
The last days are upon me...
HAVEN'T YOU HEARD?
You had better get ready
and you better be swift,
like a thief in the night
the soul can be stripped.
So do as I do.
Speak the word ear to ear,
BE CLEAR,
because whatever you speak the devil will hear.
Focus on the goodness,
bring your essence to light
and take the devil to his plight.
That's right.

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Tyme commented on HAVE YOU NOT HEARD?

07-26-2010

I'm glad the devil can hear; especially when I quote that word to him...ooohh girl, does he get mad!

aliciagall

01/12/2011

I hope the DEVIL IS PISSED OFF!! Thanks and looking down at my comments... You are very much appreciated for all the time you took to read my poems... LOVE IT!! Thanks!!

Nicko7 commented on HAVE YOU NOT HEARD?

05-30-2010

Another good piece of work young lady i think you have maybe rushed the end a little but hey it works you have a good message and a good way with words

aliciagall

01/12/2011

I was thinking that the message is clear, so end it... I tend to be a little long wind... I will revisit... Thanks for the comment...

Qualin commented on HAVE YOU NOT HEARD?

03-03-2010

YOU ARE A VERY GOOD POET..ESPECIALLY YOUR SUBJECT MATTER EXCELLENT WRITE .....QUALIN

aliciagall

03/15/2010

Thank you so much for your kind words...

dlyourgirl commented on HAVE YOU NOT HEARD?

02-24-2010

Preach! This was nicely done and much needed. I'm so glad you turned me onto this site & your works.

aliciagall

02/25/2010

Please continue to read. You will love the insight and expression from the gifted and talented people of this forum.

MalikPeterson commented on HAVE YOU NOT HEARD?

11-11-2009

The message you have set out here is one that everyone needs to understand but is often misunderstood. The importance of it is also being cast aside and lightened on the scales. Keep doing what you are doing and the thumbs will continue to rise up.

aliciagall

11/22/2009

Thank you so much Malik for your confidence.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

aliciagall’s Poems (25)

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LIFE 0
I REMEMBER 2
MIC CHECK 0
HAWK WHO GOES THERE? 1
It Ain't Right! 5
Where's the Faith? 4
He Doesn't Say Goodnight? 9
I'm Still Here 1
No Stone Thrown 2
DON'T TURN AWAY 18
BE BLESSED 18
HAVE YOU NOT HEARD? 10
SATAN IS HERE 21
YOUNG BROTHER, YOU SLEEP? 12
TO MICHAEL, GONE BUT NEVER FORGOTTEN. 18
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT 8
IT HAS TO BE GOD 14
ACCEPT SANITY 7
I CRY 7
I AM YOUR SISTER 6
I LOVE 14
IT JUST ME 4
Mommy Dearest 6
Drifting By 7