fight for love

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i love you baby... please stay strong, for even when your not, please lean on me, for i shall remain strong for us both. <3

fight for love

stay strong my dear,
for i know night time is near,
but through darkness' fright,
comes day light's delight,
all we need to do,
is make it through the night,
i know it will take,
all of our might,
but for our hearts happiness,
we must fight,
so let forth our fears,
as well as our tears,
but worry not my dear,
for day light is near,
and it brings with it,
our future years.

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Shelbylolann commented on fight for love

09-02-2011

I love you. The poem is great, I will never leave and will always lean on you.... I am only scared shitless to lose you. I'm sorry... Nice wording for the poem too... 10 here.

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