incoherent ramblings of a madman

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    incoherent ramblings of a madman

    Violation of vicarious, viceral vision
    invades, in spades, in Miami-Dade
    the old miller, is the killer
    who will initiate,date, sedate, and rape,until late.
    not knowing, now never needing
    always days, he stays, and plays
    the nights plights, bring fights, and sights
    of hell, he fell, soul sell, ring bell, lock cell.
    indication, conviction, execution, desolation
    yearning, burning, searing, hating, haunting
    return, to burn, it's his turn
    he'll bake,on a stake, and make it take a cake
    to the face in the place, of eternal haste, and waste.
    This alliteration nation station:

    signing off

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    UnworthyFather commented on incoherent ramblings of a madman

    06-16-2009

    Terrific flow of words, dangedmanjr!! You have successfully painted a dark portrait of the psychotic mindset and thoughts of a rapist and killer. What fuels their hatred of their victims? Often it is their own self loathing and deficiencies that cause them to strike out at society. Great job of portraying a dark, evilness that got what he had coming. Thanks for sharing.

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