To Come Through.....

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    All to familiar christmas story....PEACE

    To Come Through.....

    Spinning out of control

    I planted my feet embracing

    Mind still jettison thru expansion

    Light speed travel forever and one day

    Where is my satellite, I wander

    Tethered to unseen abilities

    Yet to fully manifest in fiscal responsibilities

    Praying for Guidance in wisdom’s agility

    How am I to accomplish xmas gift giving

    For the sake of giving, not letting down family

    My daughter wishes are prime in my design

    So many wishes , my monetary fluidity in demise

    Standing in the toy section for a girl’s doll inspection

    She want’s Hannah, but I can hardly afford Barbie

    Both lack correct cultural diversity or relativity

    Let alone depressing more in this weakened economy

    Demand is still at an all time high for my 8- year old ‘ eyes

    So I submit and commit to this patriotic false tradition

    Of coming thru with gifts for loved ones for Christmas!!!

     

    HO-HUM, BAH-HUM-BUG!!!

     

    Spinning  out  of  control  
    I planted  my  feet  embracing
    Mind  still  jettison  thru  expansion
    Light  speed  travel  forever  and  one  day
    Where  is  my  satellite,  I  wander
    Tethered  to  unseen  abilities  
    Yet  to  fully  manifest  in  fiscal  responsibilities
    Praying  for  Guidance  in  wisdom’s   agility
    How  am  I  to  accomplish  xmas   gift  giving
    For  the  sake  of  giving,  not  letting  down  family
    My  daughter  wishes  are  prime  in  my  design
    So  many  wishes ,  my  monetary  fluidity   in  demise
    Standing  in  the  toy  section  for  a  girl’s  doll  inspection
    She  want’s  Hannah,  but  I can  hardly  afford  Barbie
    Both  lack  correct  cultural  diversity  or   relativity
    Let  alone  depressing  more  in  this  weakened  economy
    Demand  is  still  at  an  all  time  high  for  my  8- year  old ‘  eyes
    So  I  submit  and  commit  to  this  patriotic  false  tradition
    Of  coming  thru  with  gifts  for  loved  ones  for  Christmas!!!
    HO-HUM,  BAH-HUM-BUG!!!
    Spinning  out  of  control  
    I planted  my  feet  embracing
    Mind  still  jettison  thru  expansion
    Light  speed  travel  forever  and  one  day
    Where  is  my  satellite,  I  wander
    Tethered  to  unseen  abilities  
    Yet  to  fully  manifest  in  fiscal  responsibilities
    Praying  for  Guidance  in  wisdom’s   agility
    How  am  I  to  accomplish  xmas   gift  giving
    For  the  sake  of  giving,  not  letting  down  family
    My  daughter  wishes  are  prime  in  my  design
    So  many  wishes ,  my  monetary  fluidity   in  demise
    Standing  in  the  toy  section  for  a  girl’s  doll  inspection
    She  want’s  Hannah,  but  I can  hardly  afford  Barbie
    Both  lack  correct  cultural  diversity  or   relativity
    Let  alone  depressing  more  in  this  weakened  economy
    Demand  is  still  at  an  all  time  high  for  my  8- year  old ‘  eyes
    So  I  submit  and  commit  to  this  patriotic  false  tradition
    Of  coming  thru  with  gifts  for  loved  ones  for  Christmas!!!
    HO-HUM,  BAH-HUM-BUG!!!

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