Your First Hero

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    Sometimes things that you would regret feel like the only way out sometimes, which is not true. People are alwas willing to help you but you must take into consideration youor own opinion and thoughts.

    Your First Hero

    Only you can make your own decisions.
    You can save yourself if you wanted to.
    If you were going to kill yourself, people can try and save you, but only you can stop yourself.
    You can listen to other people, but then you wouldn’t be respect yourself, you would be respecting them.
    Yes it is good to respect others but when it comes to you, respect yourself first.
    A hero could save you, but your first hero is you.

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    cmlestrade commented on Your First Hero

    09-21-2009

    This is true but sometimes we all need a helping hand. You are correct, the ultimate responsibility is ours but sometimes a kind word will nudge a person to think of thei responsibilities.

    writingislove

    09/23/2009

    Yes it is our respnsiblities, but in the end no matter what anyone says it is untimately your decision on what you do.

    Hampton commented on Your First Hero

    08-29-2009

    It is true that we must take responsibility for ourselves else we fall into dependency on others. Good philosophy.

    writingislove

    09/01/2009

    Thank you I completely agree, obviously. Haha. But yes, if we depend on others then we will not learn to think for ourselves.

    hdmac commented on Your First Hero

    08-29-2009

    Interesting poetry. These are deep words with truth.

    writingislove

    09/01/2009

    Thank you!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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