Bright Future

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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my class collected teddy bears to send to New York directly after 9/11. I wrote and tied poems to mine but did not sign them. i wanted them to have a personal touch for who ever got them. i hope that in a small way they helped.

Bright Future

Many things have happened.
Most not so good.
But please don't feel bad,
We in Oklahoma have been there to.
Things may look very bleak,
But I know your future will be bright.
So we send our hopes and our wishes,
To you during your darkest night.


                                              09-15-2001

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MsKrystle commented on Bright Future

09-25-2009

Thats very sweet. Sometimes something so small as showing that you care or even a poem can go a long way to make a person feel better. Nice short poem

bforibus commented on Bright Future

08-25-2009

it sounds like the poor giving the hungry traveler something to eat type poem. it was truly a very good poem. flowed well and all.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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