Questions of the Heart

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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I know the answers to these questions with the guy i'm with NOW. but i remember asking them to myself in every relationship i've ever been in and never feeling completely sure of the answers. can u answer them honestly urself?

Questions of the Heart

Do you love me,
With all your heart and soul?
Do you want me,
Or do you want something more?
Do you yearn for me,
The way I do for you?
Do you care about me,
The way I care about you?

I need to know all of this.
I need to know the whole truth.
I've got a stake in this,
Just the same as you.
I am giving you my life,
So I need to know it all.
Would you be willing to catch me,
If I were to fall?

I care so much for you.
I need to know you feel the same.
Would you still love me,
If I were to change?
Will you stand beside me,
Or will you always try to lead?
Will we be partners,
Or will you try to be the boss of me?

Will we stand together,
Or will I stand alone?
Will you hold me forever,
Or will you eventually let me go?
Will you always be my friend,
Or will you drop me like a rock?
Will we be a team and blend,
Or will we fall apart?

I don't mean to sound so insecure,
Or needy or lonely or scared.
But I have to know some of what the future holds,
Otherwise I feel adrift and I can't think clear.
My brain becomes muddled,
My feelings flip through to many gears.
So I have to know how you feel,
About the time that we have here.

So do me a favor and be honest.
There need be no lies.
There is no need to sugar coat it,
You need not pluck pretty words from the sky.
I want us to be together.
But you have to tell me the truth.
Do you love me,
The way that I love you?

09-23-09

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Tony5880 commented on Questions of the Heart

09-28-2009

That was nice I like it. thank for asking my imput. I am new to this game as well.

rougepriest commented on Questions of the Heart

09-24-2009

seems kinda long for saying the same sentiment over and over i think you could have said the same message in one verse but i dont write lovey heartbreak poems so im not sure ,thanks for sharing

Rygar commented on Questions of the Heart

09-24-2009

loved the rhyme scheme and the flow! good job! :)

kspoet1 commented on Questions of the Heart

09-24-2009

i've had those same questions and i think its a good read

stellar commented on Questions of the Heart

09-24-2009

lovely poem..but this is kind of difficult for the guy if ever she doesn't love you because it hearts...but trust is very important in a relationship...if u trust in him there is more freedom of the both of you..

stellar

09/24/2009

PS:hurts...for

stellar

09/24/2009

PS:hurts...for

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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