My Future Vows

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  • Devotion
    • melanie23
    • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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    to my future husband jamie. i love you

    My Future Vows

    You opened my eyes.
    You opened my heart.
    You helped me spread my wing,
    Right from the start.

    You never tried to chain me.
    I am still free.
    You have never had me bound or gaged.
    I remain me.

    But me is now we,
    And we are now one.
    You are the other half of my soul,
    And our life together has begun.

    I take you now,
    And I take you forever.
    You are my life,
    From this day forward.

    I pledge you my heart,
    And I take yours into my keeping.
    I shall cherish it and protect it,
    And do all I can to make you happy.

                                                    08-26-09

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    redbloodink commented on My Future Vows

    02-02-2010

    nice write...... that is awesome to have found your true mate.... many blessings to you and your new family..... red

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